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Pimping Out
~KevinXGwen ~invader-hime
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2 Times One Half=my comic.
And other comics
Some criticisms though, don't fill the eyes so much. He kinda looks cross-eyed. Maybe if you placed the pupil and iris in the middle, and had the whites show at both edges?
Also, where his left arm can kinda be seen in the inside of his sleeve? unless you meant for it to blend in with the sleeve, shade it somewhat differently. I think it's kinda hard to see where his arm is and where it's just the cloth of the sleeve. ditto with the shoulder/hood area.
Though since this is your techno story, if you were aiming for the guy kinda blending in w/ his clothes (meaning computer language), it does work. Blend in his arm more with the sleeve though (no breaks in the pattern). And mention that it's techno thing, for visitors who just happen to click on it.
wow... this is long. very nice work though!
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